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I sipped coffee and wrote in my journal. Beyond the window, daylight had not yet arrived.
Annabelleโs ears perked as the kitchen door rattled.
Once.
Twice.
Annabelle growled.
I raced upstairs to wake my husband.
โSomeoneโs trying to break in!โ
John unlocked the door to find our daughter and her boyfriend enjoying a sunrise swim.
Kalpana Solsi says
lovely . the parents must be relieved.
Debbie says
A happy ending. ๐ Well done!
Corinne Rodrigues says
Good girl, Annabelle! ๐ I knew you’d ace this, Talya. ๐
Talya Tate Boerner says
Flash fiction is my fav!
menopausal mama says
You had me going there for a minute! I was nervous!
Talya Tate Boerner says
so was I:)) true story.
Kathy says
I loved your story!! I was right on the edge.
Kathy
http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
Talya Tate Boerner says
Thanks Kathy!
Rainbow Hues says
That’s a great one…I found it utterly cute ๐
Talya Tate Boerner says
Thank you!
Aditi says
Loved this…crisp and witty! ๐
Talya Tate Boerner says
thank you!
Dorothy Latimer Johnson says
Good dog! Good ending! Good writing!
Talya Tate Boerner says
Thanks!
themuseumpiece says
Lovely story.. ๐
Talya Tate Boerner says
Thank you!
Me says
Talya, in my part of the world..if I had a bf and had we been swimming in the pool outside.. what would’ve followed would have been a 1000 page murder mystery ๐ ๐
SO well Written ๐ ๐ ๐
Talya Tate Boerner says
Thank you so much!
Bhavya says
Awww… that was cute!
Ishithaa
Richa Singh says
I loved Deepti’s comment. I would like to second it. True in my side of world the real murder mystery would start after ๐
Richa
Talya Tate Boerner says
Thank you! I was limited to 55 words – LOL.
Shanique Roca says
My first though was oh I bet this is a true story. Good job with the 55..
Talya Tate Boerner says
Yes it was. Thanks!
a Rat says
good one ๐
Talya Tate Boerner says
thank you!
vishalbheeroo says
Woohoo! I so love the unpredictable and heart-pounding climax. feels like watching a movie:)
Talya Tate Boerner says
Thank you so much!