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I sipped coffee and wrote in my journal. Beyond the window, daylight had not yet arrived.
Annabelle’s ears perked as the kitchen door rattled.
Once.
Twice.
Annabelle growled.
I raced upstairs to wake my husband.
“Someone’s trying to break in!”
John unlocked the door to find our daughter and her boyfriend enjoying a sunrise swim.
lovely . the parents must be relieved.
A happy ending. 🙂 Well done!
Good girl, Annabelle! 😉 I knew you’d ace this, Talya. 🙂
Flash fiction is my fav!
You had me going there for a minute! I was nervous!
so was I:)) true story.
I loved your story!! I was right on the edge.
Kathy
http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
Thanks Kathy!
That’s a great one…I found it utterly cute 🙂
Thank you!
Loved this…crisp and witty! 🙂
thank you!
Good dog! Good ending! Good writing!
Thanks!
Lovely story.. 🙂
Thank you!
Talya, in my part of the world..if I had a bf and had we been swimming in the pool outside.. what would’ve followed would have been a 1000 page murder mystery 😛 😛
SO well Written 😀 😀 😀
Thank you so much!
Awww… that was cute!
Ishithaa
I loved Deepti’s comment. I would like to second it. True in my side of world the real murder mystery would start after 😀
Richa
Thank you! I was limited to 55 words – LOL.
My first though was oh I bet this is a true story. Good job with the 55..
Yes it was. Thanks!
good one 🙂
thank you!
Woohoo! I so love the unpredictable and heart-pounding climax. feels like watching a movie:)
Thank you so much!