trees exhale October 5, 2013 By Talya Tate Boerner summer’s final breathvanishes into fall asweary trees exhale. This haiku was written for the Write Tribe Contest 2. talya Grace Grits and GardeningFarm. Food. Garden. Life.
Bryan Jones says October 5, 2013 at 6:11 am Haiku deliverswhat most people don’t expectwhile being truthful!
Pheno Menon says October 6, 2013 at 10:17 pm thanks for the entry.. Stay posted for the results ๐ PhenoMenonhttp://throodalookingglass.com/2013/10/dragonfly2/
Gary Henderson says October 7, 2013 at 12:10 pm Weary trees exhaling. Kinda makes those breezes I hear blowing through the trees take on a different meaning. Maybe they’re yawning and getting ready for their autumnal nap. ๐
Suzy says October 11, 2013 at 10:07 pm I love the weary trees exhaling – almost heard their sighs. Nice one.
KParthasarathi says October 12, 2013 at 5:31 am That is a beautiful and elegant way of expressing the onset of fall and departure of summer.
Kathy says
Brilliant!! Kind of summers last hurrah! Love it.
Talya Tate Boerner says
thanks Kathy!
Bryan Jones says
Haiku delivers
what most people don’t expect
while being truthful!
Talya Tate Boerner says
Love it Bryan!
jyothisdayout says
Beautiful is the word! ๐
Pheno Menon says
thanks for the entry.. Stay posted for the results ๐
PhenoMenon
http://throodalookingglass.com/2013/10/dragonfly2/
Gary Henderson says
Weary trees exhaling. Kinda makes those breezes I hear blowing through the trees take on a different meaning. Maybe they’re yawning and getting ready for their autumnal nap. ๐
Suzy says
I love the weary trees exhaling – almost heard their sighs. Nice one.
Talya Tate Boerner says
Thank you Suzy!
KParthasarathi says
That is a beautiful and elegant way of expressing the onset of fall and departure of summer.
norrbu says
I can feel the exhail’ing’. ๐
thevastnothing says
Great tayla, Captured the mood perfectly