trees exhale October 5, 2013 By Talya Tate Boerner 12 Comments summer’s final breathvanishes into fall asweary trees exhale. This haiku was written for the Write Tribe Contest 2. talya Grace Grits and GardeningFarm. Food. Garden. Life.
Bryan Jones says October 5, 2013 at 6:11 am Haiku deliverswhat most people don’t expectwhile being truthful! Reply
Pheno Menon says October 6, 2013 at 10:17 pm thanks for the entry.. Stay posted for the results ๐ PhenoMenonhttp://throodalookingglass.com/2013/10/dragonfly2/ Reply
Gary Henderson says October 7, 2013 at 12:10 pm Weary trees exhaling. Kinda makes those breezes I hear blowing through the trees take on a different meaning. Maybe they’re yawning and getting ready for their autumnal nap. ๐ Reply
Suzy says October 11, 2013 at 10:07 pm I love the weary trees exhaling – almost heard their sighs. Nice one. Reply
KParthasarathi says October 12, 2013 at 5:31 am That is a beautiful and elegant way of expressing the onset of fall and departure of summer. Reply
Brilliant!! Kind of summers last hurrah! Love it.
thanks Kathy!
Haiku delivers
what most people don’t expect
while being truthful!
Love it Bryan!
Beautiful is the word! ๐
thanks for the entry.. Stay posted for the results ๐
PhenoMenon
http://throodalookingglass.com/2013/10/dragonfly2/
Weary trees exhaling. Kinda makes those breezes I hear blowing through the trees take on a different meaning. Maybe they’re yawning and getting ready for their autumnal nap. ๐
I love the weary trees exhaling – almost heard their sighs. Nice one.
Thank you Suzy!
That is a beautiful and elegant way of expressing the onset of fall and departure of summer.
I can feel the exhail’ing’. ๐
Great tayla, Captured the mood perfectly