100 Words on Saturday Week 10 Prompt – Dark Secrets
What โcha got there Jack?
Startled to see his mother standing in the doorway, he slammed the cigar box lid.
Nothing. Just my box for special things.
What kind of things?
Just things I find when Iโm out playing, and things my friends give me. Michael gave me a matchbox car when I traded my chocolate milk at school… He smiled innocently, looking up from the floor.
Okay, supperโs ready. Her voice trailed down the hallway.
Pulling the fistful of bubble gum from his pocket, he added it to his box of growing secrets, and shoved it under the bed.
talya
Talya's Mom says
Loved your 100 words. At first, I thought the picture was of Tate’s drawer.
Corinne Rodrigues says
Oh dear – boys will be boys! Loved it and the picture too.
Emily Rose Thrasher says
What a sweet story about a little boy. Makes me think of my kids and their hidden secrets of rocks and dirt in their pockets LOL
Joyce Lansky says
All little boys need their little secrets.
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Kathy says
Lovely story and I remember having such a collection when I was a little kid. You captured this so well.
Kathy
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patrickoscheen says
aww love this! great job!
Talya Tate Boerner says
Thank you Patrick!
Nan says
I like this story, what a great little vignette!
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Talya Tate Boerner says
Thank you Nan!
Cairn Rodrigues says
Boxes for special things are mandatory ๐
Bryan Jones says
Very cool, like the pic too!
Talya Tate Boerner says
Thanks Bryan. (Tate’s little box…)
Anne says
Great story for just a hundred words! Nominating you for an award. Check it out at http://anne-writersspace.blogspot.com/2013/05/the-icing-on-my-cake.html
JANU says
All of us would have done this at some point of time…we stash away a few things which are valuable only to us. Nice story.
Jyothi says
Box of secrets! I guess everyone has one. ๐
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Suzy says
A nice light hearted view of dark secrets – loved your take on it. And the pic is awesome.